A letter to my county commisioners. Feedback wanted.

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Today I went to a county commision meeting to hear them deny me a raise that I need....what I heard was that they were going to cut vital needs of my community. When the citizens spoke, the Mayor and two county commisioners got up and took a coffee break. This is my e-mail response to their actions and my thoughts and veiws since I was not able to speak today, not that they would have paid attention...here it is.

Please be honest as I will be sending this out shortly. Thanks in advance, its a little long and a few errors I have to correct.

My name is Zacharias Reis, I am 23 years old and a 15 year resident of Monroe County. I am writing this to express my extreme discontent with the way that you acted and the way you have disrespected the citizens of this county. We all showed up to this meeting. Some of us took time out of work. Some of us woke up 5 hours too early because we work nights to be able to attend this meeting. Some of us took off of work all together, some of us used our one day of rest and relaxation for this month to be there. We all sat and listened to what you had to say and what you chose not to say.



Then it was our turn to speak....we expected you all to listen. I expected you to at least pay enough attention that you could discuss the concerns of your citizens with them instead of looking up from the paper work on your table long enough to say "Thank you, next speaker". I expected too much I suppose. I am disgusted at the level of disrespect you have shown to your community. You should be ashamed.



Today you spoke of the Trauma Star Helo, and I will agree...it is a service that this county needs. It would be a grave mistake to disband the Trauma Star program. Disbanding the Trauma Star program is putting your life, my life, my brothers, my sisters, my friends, my acquaintances all at risk......This community would be at risk. I would hate to be that one pour soul trapped inside of my vehicle somewhere along the US1and that under paid under appreciated public servant comes to my window and tells me Mr. Reis, I'm very sorry but your going to die tonight.....The things you stood for, the things you could have accomplished in this life, the people you have touched and the people you will touch...sorry, it just does not fit the budget. You cannot put a price on some ones life, if you think I am wrong in saying this I ask you....how much would you pay to spend one day with a loved one? This is something that should not have ever been questioned, rather evaluated and a plan formulated to make it work. If there is a will there is a way.



You also spoke of the requested raise for the Monroe County Sheriffs Office. When you spoke of it I thought that Sheriff Richard Roth himself requested a raise for him and him only. I did not realize until speaking with another member of the audience hours after the fact that you were speaking of the exact matter that I was in attendance for......my raise. You seem to think that the current rate of pay for a low level officer is sufficient to be able to live off of here in Monroe County. I am 23 years old, I dream of buying a house. I dream of starting a family in Monroe County. They are short lived dreams awoken by a nightmares. The sad and harsh truth is that I cannot tell you how many years of service I will be able to offer to my community. With the rate of rising costs in these trying times it gets harder and harder as the days pass. At the end of this month I will be left with a few dollars and a couple of packs of ramen noodles to hold me over till the next payday. One of the speakers brought up that a lot of officers are going else where in the state of Florida where the pay is better and the cost of living is lower. This thought has crossed my mind more than a few times, still I remain. I will remain here serving until I am buried in credit card debt, with my phone ringing non stop from collection agencies. I am not ready to give up on my home, I will not turn my back on my home, I urge you to stand with me and not turn you back on those that protect you. The women and men that run into burning buildings to drag out the victims, the paramedics saving lives in our community, the police officers that would jump in front of a loaded gun to protect this community. These are the people that are willing, and are giving their lives to this community each day. All were asking for is to able to continue to serve our community, to protect our community. I will never become a millionaire, I will never own a mansion, I will never be able to buy a luxury sedan off the showroom floor, but on my death bed ill be able to remember those in my home town that I was able to help in their time of need. The exodus of your public servants has begun. Please end it.



The last issue I would like to address is cutting community services. I was raised to respect my elders. Our senior citizens cannot go out and work, they need our help. This is a service that we cannot go without. Let me run a scenario by you. A senior citizen is sitting at home, and begins to have a medical emergency. He/she calls 911 for help, at that exact time there is an accident somewhere in the vicinity to that persons residence. All the budgeted medical/fire/and police are tied up in that incident. When enough of those emergency personnel are able to get to that person they realize he/she needs to be flown out to a facility somewhere on the main land. No Trauma Star, Lifenet is an hour out when this person has exactly one hour left to live....to think, this persons medical emergency could have been avoided by a vital doctors appointment he/she was supposed to be at and could have been put into the hospital hours earlier that day, but sadly he/she was unable to make it due to the recent cut in community services.



I pray that you can see the big picture here. You need all of the above mentioned. If you disband Trauma Star you are putting a dollar sign on a human life that could very well be your own. By not giving your public servants enough of a raise to be able to live here the end result is a force of rookies, trained by rookies. The blind will lead the blind. Once again you are putting a dollar sign on human lives. By cutting your community services people will not receive the care they desperately need....again, lives are at risk. I realize that you have all been put in a rock and hard place to decide what to do and who to cut short, but it was you that took us down this road. I expect you to lead this community back to the right path. This community is unlike any other. We are all friends, we see each other all to often. When a hurricane comes and destroys everything in our lives we all lean on one another and don't stop helping and giving until the last nail is replaced. I ask you to replace the last nail, fix the damages caused, right the wrongs. Ensure that Monroe County will always remain the place I claim as my home, if that is out of your pay grade please direct me to the person with that pay grade.



I thank you for the time you have taken to read my e-mail. I hope what I have said here sinks in and might help you to see another way out of this mess. You may see this on some bumpers around the Florida Keys "One human family" I say its about time we start act like it. Lets work as a team, as a community to correct this.



Respectfully

Zacharias Reis
 
I put myself in their position, read the first two paragraphs, and gave up.

I am going on a limb by not reading the rest and saying you might have a perfectly good point, but if this letter was directed to me, I would've tossed it away after the first two paragraphs at the audacity that you had to insult me or my judgement.

Telling "me" that "I" should be ashamed of myself, and that I didnt listen, and similar things rarely ever (to my experience) would cause me to be even open to reading what is in the rest of the letter. This can apply to either a discussion in person, or a letter. Not to say this would be discarded immedietly, because out of sheer curiosity the reader might actually finish the letter. But their minds will not be open to your points as you shut the door on them pretty hard on those statements. I guarantee that as soon as they read those first two paragraphs, they will take a defensive attitude towards the subject. Defensiveness pushes excuses, which in the end are reasons (possibly poor) to why they are going to stick to their decisions.

No one wants to be wrong, and if you approach a person by attacking them (even if slightly), they might defend the point. I mean, who here has not been proven wrong and fought until the end refusing to admit it? Might have been something simple, as an option available on a certain car... or the chassi that a certain motor was available. Or something your parents caught you messing up. You didnt want the blame of being wrong, so you just shut yourself from blame and toss it elsewhere.

If they made the mistake of not reading hearing your voices in the first place, make sure that you don't slip up and have them discard their attention as well on this letter.

That being said, still on the two paragraphs that I have read, I do like how you mentioned the sacrifices that many have made to attend that meeting. That's a definite plus and I like the emphasis on it.

But as a suggestion, find things that they have done in the past to compliment them in their good accomplishments while they served the county. Emphasize those and tie it along with the reason why you guys sacrificed to much to attend this meeting. After you sang all your praises, you say that you feel like your voice (which I'm sure many others share the same) has not been given enough consideration.

Then you bring in your points.

That's my two cents. I hope you have the time to edit that (if you agree with what I'm saying) before submitting that letter.
 
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send it to the news station . they love to make official look bad ! ...you dont have nothing to loose... but wait for the reply if you dont get a reply in a week, send it every monday and friday till you receive an answer :)

I put myself in their position, read the first two paragraphs, and gave up.

I am going on a limb by not reading the rest and saying you might have a perfectly good point, but if this letter was directed to me, I would've tossed it away after the first two paragraphs at the audacity that you had to insult me or my judgement. .
Yes but a Goverment or County official is bound to read it completely and acknowledge the letter as part of their duty and functions... they receive long letters everyday is politics.. and they can not tossed it without an answer because it will be agains politics and they can get screw back :)
 
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^ I have a hard time believing that.

Since politics is shown as people who care very little about their job (and that think they are above the system, because they ARE the system) that they wouldnt try to get away with just not paying attention to a letter.

And like I said, he might even read the letter, but because of my main point on initial reactions, they will have very little cooperation to provide to Zach and his cause.
 
^ I have a hard time believing that.

Since politics is shown as people who care very little about their job (and that think they are above the system, because they ARE the system) that they wouldnt try to get away with just not paying attention to a letter.

And like I said, he might even read the letter, but because of my main point on initial reactions, they will have very little cooperation to provide to Zach and his cause.
I agree and most of them are... but there are always tv stations ready to dig up and screw powerful people.. is worth a try :)
 
I don't agree. They can just say no. If they have any reason to back up their original decision, they can.

How many times have you seen the President or a spokesperson give a reason for something and everyone around you (as well as yourself) didnt say "Bullsh*t", even after the media showed countless hours of footage proving otherwise?

I'm not listing any examples so this thread doe not go off-topic, but you get the point. You are still trying to go around the problem instead of dealing it with the person who can make the right decision.

Approach the right person, with the right attitude, open his mind to consider your points, and go from there. That's my suggestion.

- Erick
 
Bravo!!! Took the time to read the whole thing and it sounds awsome. Like some of the other guys have said, it may be a little long but in a case like this, the length is good to me.:bigthumbu
 
Telling "me" that "I" should be ashamed of myself, and that I didnt listen, and similar things rarely ever (to my experience) would cause me to be even open to reading what is in the rest of the letter.

i agree i dont think they would read it if you dont make them want too and i also think you should try to establish a little more creditablilty on the subject. good letter though and good luck
 
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Nothing gets a goverment offical's attention like a moltov cocktail thru the window of their house
 
Nothing gets a goverment offical's attention like a moltov cocktail thru the window of their house

lmfao


I think you made a good point, but the letter is a little too long.

The fact that you stated "you should be ashamed of yourselves" is offensive and will ultimately result in a defensive response, if any.

Be brief and to the point. Best of luck to you and your family.
 
The letter is a bit too harsh but...peoples lives are at risk....the officials don't read it anyways, there secretary's do, and she is gonna tell the major there was a letter from a angry man telling you that you didn't listen to the people at the meeting, that is all, sorry , but it is politics!
 
An attention grabber is key. There's a great book that talks about all of this stuff, but took me a month to read lol.
 
I put myself in their position, read the first two paragraphs, and gave up.

I am going on a limb by not reading the rest and saying you might have a perfectly good point, but if this letter was directed to me, I would've tossed it away after the first two paragraphs at the audacity that you had to insult me or my judgement.

Telling "me" that "I" should be ashamed of myself, and that I didnt listen, and similar things rarely ever (to my experience) would cause me to be even open to reading what is in the rest of the letter. This can apply to either a discussion in person, or a letter. Not to say this would be discarded immedietly, because out of sheer curiosity the reader might actually finish the letter. But their minds will not be open to your points as you shut the door on them pretty hard on those statements. I guarantee that as soon as they read those first two paragraphs, they will take a defensive attitude towards the subject. Defensiveness pushes excuses, which in the end are reasons (possibly poor) to why they are going to stick to their decisions.

No one wants to be wrong, and if you approach a person by attacking them (even if slightly), they might defend the point. I mean, who here has not been proven wrong and fought until the end refusing to admit it? Might have been something simple, as an option available on a certain car... or the chassi that a certain motor was available. Or something your parents caught you messing up. You didnt want the blame of being wrong, so you just shut yourself from blame and toss it elsewhere.

If they made the mistake of not reading hearing your voices in the first place, make sure that you don't slip up and have them discard their attention as well on this letter.

That being said, still on the two paragraphs that I have read, I do like how you mentioned the sacrifices that many have made to attend that meeting. That's a definite plus and I like the emphasis on it.

But as a suggestion, find things that they have done in the past to compliment them in their good accomplishments while they served the county. Emphasize those and tie it along with the reason why you guys sacrificed to much to attend this meeting. After you sang all your praises, you say that you feel like your voice (which I'm sure many others share the same) has not been given enough consideration.

Then you bring in your points.

That's my two cents. I hope you have the time to edit that (if you agree with what I'm saying) before submitting that letter.

agreed.

i know you've got a lot to say. but be a little more to the point.
 
sending the same letter edited for others to see to the editor of every local newspaper would get their attention very well. if you talk about losing revenue then they will pay a bit more attention. maybe also get together a signed petition. and ask for another meeting. you are the voter and you have some power.

i work for the govt too. and everytime they get enough calls from people about the same problem they have to find a solution to keep most happy. but addressing the way they reacted and asking why they acted that way and asking them to justify why they did it would be a better approach instead of taking the offensive.

but mostly anytime you mention losing revenue or angry mobs of people and oh the unhappy tourists who visit all the time and and the part time residents who want the best county to live in. i think they will get the picture.

good luck.
 
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